My Fearless Readers:
So far there haven't been any comments left for the short story entitled Fortes Fortuna Adiuvat. I am looking for some feedback as this is the first short story I have undertaken in about a year and a half. The title is latin and means: fortune favours the brave (depending on the translation can substitute brave for bold). Part Three took me about three and a half weeks to complete. Both it and Part Four are as I have written them, there will be spelling and grammatical errors but I needed to publish the end of the story after such a long time as a draft. I will be revising both parts when I am able to review it.
Thoughts, questions or comments regarding this short story?
As always, slicin' 'n' dicin'
I'm glad to see that you're flexing your writing muscle again! I think it suffered from being broken into 4 parts, this hurt the flow for me. I also found the ending anti-climatic. It was a fun read, kind of a cross between 500 and Dawn of the Dead. I look forward to your next story!
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